Hey guys, this is my first song that i wrote. Give me some feedback so i can know what i need to work on. I already have a pretty good flowing beat with this. THX XD
[verse 1]
Ya..uh..hit me with those lies like a 22, all those guys you talking to
Mystery bitch, scooby doo
Unknown caller, im not a fool, another lie, im not a tool
¨Im sorry baby¨ ok cool
..Expect me to be your friend..all those vibes you fucking send..Ya NO!
[verse 2]
This shits gettin old, how many guys you fuckin sold?
Fake bitch your fuckin cold
Your spellin hoe its fuckin bold
Wanna lie? well truth be told
...Sorry girl ain't playin nice
Stopped that when i stopped caring, all the love your fucking sharin
[verse 3]
Catch you once ill catch you twice, fake bitch your overpriced
Goog girl? check please, FAKE BITCH YOU WREAKED ME!!!...
Ya..uhh...hope u have fun with your hoe shit...im out..
As-rap released Fake bitch 2 on Fri Dec 15 2017.